Transatlanticism - Rothstein/Luciano [Boardwalk Empire]

[tju_tju_tju_tju]

Title: Transatlanticism
Characters/Pairings: Rothstein/Luciano, Meyer Lansky
Rating: R
Word Count: ~3000
Warnings: Strong sexual content, language.
Summary: It had been a month since A.R. had set voyage for Scotland – well, four weeks and two days if you wanted to get all technical about it – and Charlie was being driven out of his skull by his... needs.
Disclaimer: These characters don't belong to me, and, more importantly, neither do the actual people, who are not the subjects of this fic, the characters are. Just... just to make that clear.
A/N: I probably shouldn't be posting this, but here it is anyway. Deepest apologies for any anachronisms. And also for writing it in the first place.

"It's "Meyer and I were wondering", not "Me and Meyer was wondering".

Comments

[jolfolfille.livejournal.com]

So I don't know who these people are or anything, but I liked the story. :D It was very well done. The letter-writing thing was just adorable, even for someone who doesn't know the characters, and I laughed at the end with the "JUST. GO." and all that. ^_^

There was one sentence, towards the end, you said something like "A.R. unbuckled both of their belts, his mouth almost swallowing his whole" or something to that effect. I would specify whose mouth, like "his mouth almost swallowing Charlie's whole," or whatever. :D It just sounded a little weird. But other than that, I didn't see any errors or anything. ^_^

The point is, WELL DONE, SIR. :D

[tju-tju-tju-tju.livejournal.com]

:D Thank youuu! You should totally watch Boardwalk Empire, though; it is kick-ass.

Hmm, good point. I'll go change that in a minute.

THANK YOU, MA'AM.

[jolfolfille.livejournal.com]

I've been meaning to watch it since you started talking about how awesome it is... and another friend of mine mentioned it around the time you did, so I was like "well, this show is obviously awesome. I need to get up in that." I just haven't gotten around to it yet. But soon! :D Soooon.